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Hiding in a stall
Behind the bathroom door,
The squeaking of the hinges
Still echoes
Throughout the tiled room.
Behind her
An overflowing trash can
And toilet paper scattered everywhere.
The smell of urine,
Sour, fills the air,
Indifferent to her trembling.
The scent of iron
Mingles with the foul odor,
As crimson drips
Onto the linoleum floor.
Salty tears well up
In her crystal eyes.
Crowded voices
Echo from outside.
She bangs her fists
Against the wall,
More crimson puddles
Beneath her feet.
She sinks to her knees,
Letting out a cry.
She can't see,
Can't think.
A firm, gentle hand
Pulls her up,
Wraps her arms with cloth
And drags her
To the nurse's office.
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Author's Comments

We were asked to write two poems about a place and the memory that took place there. Having no time to really think on it, or change what first popped into my head, I scribbled two places onto the paper: the school bathroom is this one.

I give permission to :iconpoes-blood: to put this in their gallery.

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:iconjackolacherrysoda:
One of the biggest fears of my life.
As sad as it is, it made for great inspiration.

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:iconabandonedangel:
:)

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:iconmingolando:
You, Miss Queen of Twisty Endings, need to stop surprising me! I totally did not expect the setting to be at a school, but then with the "And drags her, To the nurse's office" line, it totally all fit together and made sense!

Kudos to you :glomp:

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"The test of tolerance some when we are in a majority; the test of courage comes when we are in a minority."
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:iconabandonedangel:
lol :blush: Thank you. Somehow it just turned out that way. Glad you enjoyed it. :D

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:iconmingolando:
Taha! You're welcome :)

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"The test of tolerance some when we are in a majority; the test of courage comes when we are in a minority."
Ralph W. Stockman
:iconlunadeshadow:
OMG. That's terrible!! Poor girl!!

Still, I like this. It reminds me of what I used to fear when I was in the 4th grade.

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Yeah.

Thank you very much! :heart:

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