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My heart, it has been crushed and broken.
With only words that had yet been spoken,
I realized the truth behind the lie,
The lie I created and did deny.

Why did I let myself be tormented like this?
Hoping in darkness that I’d get a kiss.
A kiss? Ha! Now I laugh at the thought,
And realize I’ve been deeply distraught.

Everyone warned me; everyone knew
What would happen to me if I let this go through.
But I listened to no one, listened to none
And then my heart’s pain had just begun.

I continued to pursue, unknowing and blind
Eventually I let it all get to my mind.
It stayed there locked up, unable to escape,
Until the locks were then able to break.

When they finally broke, and I woke from my dream
And realized that things were not what they seem.
I felt my heart then begin to break,
As I realized that I had made a mistake.

But I know it will heal and I’ll get through.
Now I know what is real is true.
I’ll get over it and let my heart go on,
And let my hope come back, for now it is gone.
©2005-2009 ~AbandonedAngel
:iconabandonedangel:

Author's Comments

I wrote this yesterday morning when I broke from my own spell. Despite what everyone told me, I refused to let go. Everyone said that this would lead to heartache, even the one I speak of, but I would not listen. I thought I was trying move on, but it was my own mind that would not break its own locks. I'm finally free, but my heart is weary. I hope to God that I don't become this obsessed with someone again....though I'm sure I will.
This poem will be submitted in ~Emotional-Writings Open Poem contest.

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:icondagger-ness:
I've read and critiqued it already, and in my eyes, it's perfect. And the preview image is also beautiful. *applauds* And you will do it again. Except the next time you'll be able to tell yourself how YOU truly feel. If that makes sense.

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"My Bible can beat up your Bible."
:iconabandonedangel:
I think it makes sense. I'm kind of a ditz, so I think it's supposed to make sense but it's not really getting there. ;P....gosh, I don't even know what the heck I'm saying. o_O

Yeah, the image. hehe I took like five shots using my mom's digital camera, and decided thought none looked very good. I chose one anyway, and changed it a little on Photoshop. I'm proud of it myself actually.

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What if I'm the kindest demon? Something you may not believe in.
:icondagger-ness:
you should be!

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"My Bible can beat up your Bible."
:iconchandraken:
Very good piece. Is this from personal experiances - for if so I must congratulate you for overcoming the spell.

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RAWR =^-^= MeAn KiTtEh
Obey the whiskers coz they own you!
:iconabandonedangel:
yes, it is. thank you very much. unfortunately I still have feelings for this person. >> but, hopefully soon I'll move on

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What if I'm the kindest demon? Something you may not believe in.
:iconchandraken:
thats the spirit. You are strong and it'll pass. I am glad you were able to figure it all out! I know countless people still stiuck in the loop

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RAWR =^-^= MeAn KiTtEh
Obey the whiskers coz they own you!
:iconabandonedangel:
^_^ thanks so much. just a comment like that inspired me to try to be strong. :hug:

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What if I'm the kindest demon? Something you may not believe in.
:iconchandraken:
aww bless ya ^^ well I am sure you can do it - who needs jerks? There are dudes and gals out there that are dying to be with you - even if neither of ya know it yet :glomp:

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RAWR =^-^= MeAn KiTtEh
Obey the whiskers coz they own you!
:iconabandonedangel:
^__________^ thank you so much. *glomps and hugs*

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What if I'm the kindest demon? Something you may not believe in.

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