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A daisy sits
Amongst the roses
Inside a garden green.
The sun is smiling
Joyfully bright.
Butterflies dance
From bloom to bloom.
The people that come here
For tea
Stare at the daisy.
"Why is that here?
It isn't a rose."
And all the roses
Laugh at her,
Laugh at her thin petals,
And her exposed pollen.
"You don't belong here," they say.
The daisy doesn't react.
She doesn't even cry.
All she really wants to do
Is shrink into the soil to hide.
©2008-2009 ~AbandonedAngel
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Author's Comments

...sometimes I feel a little..."out of place".

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:iconjackolacherrysoda:
I know exactly how you feel. Though, I see you as a more fair and regal flower, like one of those wild roses or something a deep purple. We'll make a flower up for you, like a blue and purple one, or whatever color you prefer.
Even though the message is sad, it's quite an adorable poem. ^^

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:iconchristelaln:
I love the poem!
It's so full of feeling!
That's exactly how I feel sometimes to, it's not a good feeling...

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Humans can't change the past, but they can make the future brighter!

No one is born hating, but so many die because of it...

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:iconabandonedangel:
thank you :)

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What if I'm the kindest demon? Something you may not believe in.
:iconabandonedangel:
thank you :)

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What if I'm the kindest demon? Something you may not believe in.
:iconchristelaln:
:your welcome :love: :hug:

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Humans can't change the past, but they can make the future brighter!

No one is born hating, but so many die because of it...

[link]
:iconabandonedangel:
hehe. *blushes* thank you.

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What if I'm the kindest demon? Something you may not believe in.
:iconclairesimpson87:
This poem is truely amazing! It speaks such a clear message and is very emotive! Love it! x
:iconabandonedangel:
thank you :heart:

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What if I'm the kindest demon? Something you may not believe in.
:iconclairesimpson87:
that's quite alright, it's beautiful! :hug: x

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