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Wonka's Chocolate Factory by ~AbandonedAngel:iconAbandonedAngel:





Colors of red and blue and green
And colors that not have yet been seen
Made in a place full of charming sweets.
Made in a place full of good things to eat.

Chocolate dark and chocolate milk,
Chocolate soft and smooth as silk.
By waterfall made frothy and light.
Wonderful taste and a wonderful sight.

Gum that has no ordinary taste.
Gum that’s not like mint toothpaste.
A whole dinner meal all in one;
All fine ‘til desert begins to come.

Squirrels trained to get nuts out
Of nutshells. What it’s all about
Is finding bad nuts, those squirrels cute,
And sending them down the garbage shute.

Chocolate bar changed from big to small
By television, but sometimes not all.
In pieces it floats above their heads
To transfer the chocolate's what Willy said.

An elevator made of glass
Flying above and going fast.
As you look at people down below
It looks like they’re walking very slow.

Colors of red and blue and green
And colors that have not yet been seen
Made in a place full of charming sweets.
Made in a place full of good things to eat.
©2005-2009 ~AbandonedAngel
:iconabandonedangel:

Author's Comments

Yeah. My new temporary obsession: Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. To me it's the best movie ever since Lord of the Rings. I love it because it's a lot more sinister than the old one and it's much closer to the book. Johnny Depp did such a wonderful job at the part of Wonka. I command you all to go see it now!




Willy Wonka and his Chocolate Factory copyright Roald Dahl

Photo copyright Official Charlie and the Chocolate Factory Website: [link]

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:icondagger-ness:
:clap: ^___^ I LOVE IT! I should do fanart >>;

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Cigarrettes are bad. Very bad. That's why we burn them.
:iconabandonedangel:
yay! Thankees, Dagger! :hug: ^__^ you should!

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What if I'm the kindest demon? Something you may not believe in.
:iconlovehaterela:
It is wonderful...
So reminiscent...
And lovin' the quote...
:D
:iconabandonedangel:
heehee. Thanks. ^__^

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What if I'm the kindest demon? Something you may not believe in.
:iconandreala-rae:
Hey!! Me and you are quote buddies!!:glomp: *points to sig* Isn't that just something? Hey, its a lovely quote, hard not to use it i say!!^^. I knew i'd run into someone with it soon, so congrats on being the first! *hands you a Wonka Bar*

Anyhow, this is such a lovely poetic piece, and like how you rhymed each of the lines, i always think rhyming poetry has an extra little something to them that unrhymed doesn't (Not to mention i always thought they were easier to do too! Don't mention that to my class tho -__- "No Ms. Fowler!! Please!! No more rhyming!" Psh! Babies!!) Your charming little poem took me back to reminiscing(ack!! I can't spell!:dohtwo:) bout that oh-so-awesome movie:love:. Yer not the only one obsessed over it ^^;, i think my folks and friends can back me up there. Obsessions! They're great!:heart:

Real nice work on this man:thumbsup:........and of course the good taste in quotes:clap:.

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♥ Satan loves you! ♥
:iconabandonedangel:
Hey, thanks! ^_^ *munches on Wonka bar* I always loved rhyming poems myself. I always found them easier to follow, and they're usually what pop up into my head anyway. I couldn't imagine a Wonka poem without rhyme! ;P
The siggy quote is awesome!

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What if I'm the kindest demon? Something you may not believe in.
:iconkoppelia:
Wonderful poem, i must say. I absolutely love both movies (1971 and 2005 versions) and this sums them as well as the book up very, very well. Definately faving this!

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"Vodka, green food coloring, and a 'Cool Mint' Listerine bottle is not a good combination." -SPC Schwarz

"....what about diet water??"-Liz

"A little nonsense now and then, is relished by the wisest men." -Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory
:iconabandonedangel:
hehe. thanks ^_^

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What if I'm the kindest demon? Something you may not believe in.
:icongummybeargoddess:
I love this! It's so awesome! It's like a summary in rhyme wonderful job!

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Come on, this is screaming photo op.

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